 poem 4 my girl |
| soup nazi |
 09/21/04 10:58pm
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 Colonel  Group: {MOB} Regs Posts: 1164 Joined: December 4th 2003 From: georgia Member No.: 517  |
As some of you know i write poetry. Well this one is a poem i wrote for jessica.
Siting hear waiting for the phone to ring waiting for the sweet words you bring Just to hear your voice brightens my day nothing else matters and all problems go away the world is timeless when your not around everything is dead to me not a single sound suddenly i open the door and there you are looking deep in your eyes sparkels of the stars I grab you towards me holding you tight never letting you out of my sight Ill keep you safe and warm when things get bad ill keep you out of the storm this passion will never fade the love i have will last every day to the ground on one knee looking in your eyes i ask will you marry me this is a poem i wrote for her but i have not yet showed her it, i will be poping the question real soon, before i go to basic. The song that ill play in the back ground with flickering candel light while she reads this will be " garth brooks- to make you feel my love" This post has been edited by soup nazi: 09/21/04 11:00pm -------------------- |
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| .AmbiencE. |
09/22/04 3:47pm
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 Colonel  Group: Forum Member Posts: 1006 Joined: July 26th 2004 From: pittsburgh Member No.: 833 |
you would marry him u queer. anyways very nice soup...i write a bit myself....3 nationally published poems...not too shabby. That'll get her love juices pumpin big fella.
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soup nazi poem 4 my girl 09/21/04 10:58pm
Hard Drive very soup. 09/21/04 11:17pm Hard Drive I meant very nice soup. 09/21/04 11:17pm That Guy Jessica isn't a mans name.....j/k man go for i... 09/22/04 12:04am GanGstA_Ba||eR Looks like n R&B song :P,,, Nah man its prett... 09/22/04 1:44am Solidrocker woo hooo go soup 09/22/04 7:36am Solidrocker im sure we will all be invited to the wedding :P ... 09/22/04 7:38am ={DMG}=ashe Chicks love that romantic shit. Good luck and cong... 09/22/04 10:07am DIESEL Soup, I take it u havent :hump her yet since urt... 09/22/04 11:15am D-DayVetLarry w00t. Go get er' cowboy. 09/22/04 1:43pm PISTOFFBAD Damn, that sounds like romance. I'd almost mar... 09/22/04 3:19pm soup nazi ty guys 09/22/04 8:45pm Bargod Congrats Soup and I wish you the best of luck. My... 09/23/04 4:50am Silver nice poem. good luck with the big question. she m... 09/23/04 6:03am cypher I prefer this one...
I'm tired of women, fuck... 09/23/04 1:25pm GanGstA_Ba||eR How bout this one...
If you know a bitch...
you d... 09/23/04 1:37pm Sabo soups is the gayest so far. lol jk bro gj u have b... 09/23/04 4:05pm PISTOFFBAD
If soup nazi had thrown in a new Harley or a Cor... 09/23/04 4:24pm xl-FLAME-lx deep 09/23/04 5:10pm Silver
its a nice thing he did. i like poetry.
B) 09/23/04 7:17pm ={DMG}=ashe Im kind of old fashioned, so I prefer the older st... 09/23/04 10:24pm Johnzillah Roses are red
violets are blue
Some rhymes rhymes... 09/23/04 11:24pm realdeal This one always get's my wife goin'....
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yes, women love these sorts of messages, but she... 09/24/04 10:45am soup nazi yeah i didn't relize that wassy untile later..... 09/24/04 10:48am Johnzillah
The suspense is killing me. GD is Epacy going to... 09/24/04 8:06pm ={DMG}=ashe Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Epacy sucks cock,... 09/24/04 9:30pm Blakjak lol n1 ashe ahh god im crying {w1 09/25/04 8:39am GanGstA_Ba||eR Damm man im telling yah, theres a lot of talent in... 09/25/04 5:17pm Epacy Ashe, you mention me in the same breath as Johnzil... 01/03/05 1:33am
Bardot
Don't listen to those cynical, tasteless Mo... 01/03/05 7:06pm
Johnzillah
Sounds to me your sucking I mean speaking from ... 01/04/05 4:31pm behemoth Milk milk lemonade around the corner fudge is made... 01/03/05 8:23pm Slimshady Ya, nice poem man, I hope it all goes through. :h... 01/03/05 8:32pm Phat Boy get er' done soup!
-phats 01/03/05 11:44pm GanGsta_XtyleZ Take that shit dawg. :D 01/04/05 2:23am $layer ouch ep got owned :P 01/04/05 4:42pm GanGsta_XtyleZ And another thread gone of topic. Thats like 230 n... 01/04/05 4:53pm $layer o well how romantic soup :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub... 01/04/05 5:51pm Stockguy Congratulations Soup. Hope all goes well. 01/04/05 7:41pm Epacy Owned? It is funny how out of the history of these... 01/05/05 12:05am $layer easy i was only making a joke :fing :fing :fing... 01/05/05 5:05pm Epacy I think in all my playing I have only bashed 1 or ... 01/05/05 7:44pm DIESEL no i dont bash either...whats the point? Just reme... 01/05/05 8:24pm Epacy
Well put. 01/05/05 8:48pm GanGsta_XtyleZ I second that. 01/05/05 11:40pm Epacy
First you have to rack up kills XtyleZ. :P 01/06/05 12:10am GanGsta_XtyleZ True that lol. I just wanted to support the idea o... 01/06/05 7:35am Silver
so very true. fun to get on ur nerves like i hav... 01/06/05 12:51pm GanGsta_XtyleZ Lol. You didnt get on my nerves. I was just messin... 01/06/05 1:20pm $layer i like taking a certian level and just keep on bas... 01/06/05 5:51pm .AmbiencE. this thread is kinda old. 01/06/05 10:35pm Himmler Diesel=EZ Bash.... 01/08/05 5:17am DIESEL I hope we beat you Himmler and I find ur body im ... 01/08/05 12:13pm GanGstA_Ba||eR
You sick mofo, someone drop you as a baby right?... 01/09/05 1:26pm GanGsta_XtyleZ ya... did you fell on you pennis? 01/09/05 7:18pm Bardot Since he thinks with his penis, what difference do... 01/12/05 9:13pm GanGsta_XtyleZ Bradot are you one of mona lisa's anoying fami... 01/12/05 9:44pm |
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