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soup nazi
post 09/21/04 10:58pm
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As some of you know i write poetry. Well this one is a poem i wrote for jessica.

Siting hear waiting for the phone to ring
waiting for the sweet words you bring

Just to hear your voice brightens my day
nothing else matters and all problems go away

the world is timeless when your not around
everything is dead to me not a single sound

suddenly i open the door and there you are
looking deep in your eyes sparkels of the stars

I grab you towards me holding you tight
never letting you out of my sight

Ill keep you safe and warm
when things get bad ill keep you out of the storm

this passion will never fade
the love i have will last every day

to the ground on one knee
looking in your eyes i ask

will you marry me


this is a poem i wrote for her but i have not yet showed her it, i will be poping the question real soon, before i go to basic. The song that ill play in the back ground with flickering candel light while she reads this will be " garth brooks- to make you feel my love"

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Damm man im telling yah, theres a lot of talent in here, lots of artists


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soup nazi   poem 4 my girl   09/21/04 10:58pm
Hard Drive   very soup.   09/21/04 11:17pm
Hard Drive   I meant very nice soup.   09/21/04 11:17pm
That Guy   Jessica isn't a mans name.....j/k man go for i...   09/22/04 12:04am
GanGstA_Ba||eR   Looks like n R&B song :P,,, Nah man its prett...   09/22/04 1:44am
Solidrocker   woo hooo go soup   09/22/04 7:36am
Solidrocker   im sure we will all be invited to the wedding :P ...   09/22/04 7:38am
={DMG}=ashe   Chicks love that romantic shit. Good luck and cong...   09/22/04 10:07am
DIESEL   Soup, I take it u havent :hump her yet since urt...   09/22/04 11:15am
D-DayVetLarry   w00t. Go get er' cowboy.   09/22/04 1:43pm
PISTOFFBAD   Damn, that sounds like romance. I'd almost mar...   09/22/04 3:19pm
.AmbiencE.   you would marry him u queer. anyways very nice sou...   09/22/04 3:47pm
soup nazi   ty guys   09/22/04 8:45pm
Bargod   Congrats Soup and I wish you the best of luck. My...   09/23/04 4:50am
Silver   nice poem. good luck with the big question. she m...   09/23/04 6:03am
cypher   I prefer this one... I'm tired of women, fuck...   09/23/04 1:25pm
GanGstA_Ba||eR   How bout this one... If you know a bitch... you d...   09/23/04 1:37pm
Sabo   soups is the gayest so far. lol jk bro gj u have b...   09/23/04 4:05pm
PISTOFFBAD   If soup nazi had thrown in a new Harley or a Cor...   09/23/04 4:24pm
xl-FLAME-lx   deep   09/23/04 5:10pm
Silver   its a nice thing he did. i like poetry. B)   09/23/04 7:17pm
={DMG}=ashe   Im kind of old fashioned, so I prefer the older st...   09/23/04 10:24pm
Johnzillah   Roses are red violets are blue Some rhymes rhymes...   09/23/04 11:24pm
realdeal   This one always get's my wife goin'.... ...   09/23/04 11:26pm
Wassy   yes, women love these sorts of messages, but she...   09/24/04 10:45am
soup nazi   yeah i didn't relize that wassy untile later.....   09/24/04 10:48am
Johnzillah   The suspense is killing me. GD is Epacy going to...   09/24/04 8:06pm
={DMG}=ashe   Roses are red, Violets are blue, Epacy sucks cock,...   09/24/04 9:30pm
Blakjak   lol n1 ashe ahh god im crying {w1   09/25/04 8:39am
GanGstA_Ba||eR   Damm man im telling yah, theres a lot of talent in...   09/25/04 5:17pm
Epacy   Ashe, you mention me in the same breath as Johnzil...   01/03/05 1:33am
Bardot   Don't listen to those cynical, tasteless Mo...   01/03/05 7:06pm
Johnzillah   Sounds to me your sucking I mean speaking from ...   01/04/05 4:31pm
behemoth   Milk milk lemonade around the corner fudge is made...   01/03/05 8:23pm
Slimshady   Ya, nice poem man, I hope it all goes through. :h...   01/03/05 8:32pm
Phat Boy   get er' done soup! -phats   01/03/05 11:44pm
GanGsta_XtyleZ   Take that shit dawg. :D   01/04/05 2:23am
$layer   ouch ep got owned :P   01/04/05 4:42pm
GanGsta_XtyleZ   And another thread gone of topic. Thats like 230 n...   01/04/05 4:53pm
$layer   o well how romantic soup :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub...   01/04/05 5:51pm
Stockguy   Congratulations Soup. Hope all goes well.   01/04/05 7:41pm
Epacy   Owned? It is funny how out of the history of these...   01/05/05 12:05am
$layer   easy i was only making a joke :fing :fing :fing...   01/05/05 5:05pm
Epacy   I think in all my playing I have only bashed 1 or ...   01/05/05 7:44pm
DIESEL   no i dont bash either...whats the point? Just reme...   01/05/05 8:24pm
Epacy   Well put.   01/05/05 8:48pm
GanGsta_XtyleZ   I second that.   01/05/05 11:40pm
Epacy   First you have to rack up kills XtyleZ. :P   01/06/05 12:10am
GanGsta_XtyleZ   True that lol. I just wanted to support the idea o...   01/06/05 7:35am
Silver   so very true. fun to get on ur nerves like i hav...   01/06/05 12:51pm
GanGsta_XtyleZ   Lol. You didnt get on my nerves. I was just messin...   01/06/05 1:20pm
$layer   i like taking a certian level and just keep on bas...   01/06/05 5:51pm
.AmbiencE.   this thread is kinda old.   01/06/05 10:35pm
Himmler   Diesel=EZ Bash....   01/08/05 5:17am
DIESEL   I hope we beat you Himmler and I find ur body im ...   01/08/05 12:13pm
GanGstA_Ba||eR   You sick mofo, someone drop you as a baby right?...   01/09/05 1:26pm
GanGsta_XtyleZ   ya... did you fell on you pennis?   01/09/05 7:18pm
Bardot   Since he thinks with his penis, what difference do...   01/12/05 9:13pm
GanGsta_XtyleZ   Bradot are you one of mona lisa's anoying fami...   01/12/05 9:44pm


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