As some of you know i write poetry. Well this one is a poem i wrote for jessica.

Siting hear waiting for the phone to ring
waiting for the sweet words you bring

Just to hear your voice brightens my day
nothing else matters and all problems go away

the world is timeless when your not around
everything is dead to me not a single sound

suddenly i open the door and there you are
looking deep in your eyes sparkels of the stars

I grab you towards me holding you tight
never letting you out of my sight

Ill keep you safe and warm
when things get bad ill keep you out of the storm

this passion will never fade
the love i have will last every day

to the ground on one knee
looking in your eyes i ask

will you marry me


this is a poem i wrote for her but i have not yet showed her it, i will be poping the question real soon, before i go to basic. The song that ill play in the back ground with flickering candel light while she reads this will be " garth brooks- to make you feel my love"

very soup.

I meant very nice soup.

Jessica isn't a mans name.....j/k man go for it....

Looks like n R&B song ,,, Nah man its pretty good (corny ass dude) j/k |

woo hooo go soup

im sure we will all be invited to the wedding j/k

Chicks love that romantic shit. Good luck and congrats, Soup.

Ps: If that poem doesnt do the trick, try "There Once Was a Man From Nantuckett...."

Soup, I take it u havent her yet since urtrying to get the panties off now by using poetry....either that will work or get some roofies

w00t. Go get er' cowboy.

Damn, that sounds like romance. I'd almost marry you. Very nice, that should do the trick.

you would marry him u queer. anyways very nice soup...i write a bit myself....3 nationally published poems...not too shabby. That'll get her love juices pumpin big fella.

ty guys

Congrats Soup and I wish you the best of luck. My only advice to you is that you should make it sweet and to the point. Not that I'm saying don't use your poetry. I personally believe that you should make it "look" more "spontaneous". Shit, what the hell do I know, I asked my wife to marry me in the bar we always hung out at with all our friends around in the booth we always sat in. It was a no brainer. People have always said how "cool" it was or how "appropriate" it was, but quite frankly I didn't know how or when to do it so I saw an opening and I took it. Good Luck, Soup! My best to you and your soon to be fiance!

nice poem. good luck with the big question. she may have some competion, pistoffbad is trying to get in the running....

I prefer this one...

I'm tired of women, fuck bitches,
Give me a slut who cooks and does dishes.

How bout this one...

If you know a bitch...
you dont listen to that bitch...
you dont argue with that bitch...
all you do is fuck that bitch...

soups is the gayest so far. lol jk bro gj u have balls for putting that up for all these boys to read.

deep

Im kind of old fashioned, so I prefer the older style of poetry.

Roses are red
Pickles are green
I like your legs
and what's inbetween

My wife tears up everytime I read her that poem. I am a hopeless romantic.

Roses are red
violets are blue

Some rhymes rhymes

THIS ONE DONT

This one always get's my wife goin'....


Roses are red
Violets are blue
I want to cum
Inside of you

yeah i didn't relize that wassy untile later...o well when and if she finds out she'll get over it..shes pretty kool

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Epacy sucks cock,
Johnzilla does too.

lol n1 ashe ahh god im crying

Damm man im telling yah, theres a lot of talent in here, lots of artists

Ashe, you mention me in the same breath as Johnzillah, now that is worse than sucking cock.

Don't listen to those cynical, tasteless Morons. That kind of romantic act restores my faith in men. I think she'll love it!

Milk milk lemonade around the corner fudge is made.

Ya, nice poem man, I hope it all goes through.

get er' done soup!

-phats

Take that shit dawg.

Sounds to me your sucking I mean speaking from experience.

ouch ep got owned

And another thread gone of topic. Thats like 230 now.

o well how romantic soup good luck with jessica

Congratulations Soup. Hope all goes well.

Owned? It is funny how out of the history of these forums there are two posts on here about me getting bashed. Which, in itself is a questionable gloating act.

easy i was only making a joke nothing on these forums should realy be taken seriously (usually)

I think in all my playing I have only bashed 1 or 2 people. Now that has to be some kind of record.

no i dont bash either...whats the point? Just remember when ur bashing im raking up the kills and probably #1 at the end of the map

Well put.

I second that.

First you have to rack up kills XtyleZ.

True that lol. I just wanted to support the idea of bashing being not that important.

so very true. fun to get on ur nerves like i have been to u...LOL!